Tuesday, April 17, 2007

My Newest Story

The second chapter of Circle Park, originally called Wonderland, was posted today. This story doesn't seem to be as popular as my previous ones and I'm not sure why readers don't seem to be liking it. If you could let me know why, leaving a comment for me, I would greatly appreciate it. I just want my stories to be liked and I want to improve my writing so if something with the story is not well-liked, please let me know. I'll do my best to change it. Thank you so much.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

I don't usually review, but I like this story so far. Ryan is one of my favorite characters and I am really excited to learn more about him and catch up on the lives of the other characters!

maica said...

i personally love this story. the whole, his mom dating her father thing was a great twist. Lindsey and Matt are back which makes me so happy [i love that couple] and they had a son haha. just give people time, and they'll learn to love the story just as much as me. well take care! wishing you and your family the best =]

Anonymous said...

I like this story but i think people dont like it as much because he did treat rachel quite bad and it obvously hurt her. so if the story gets better and they start getting together ir he realises he likes her people will enjoy it more. i think that youre stories are great personally

Anonymous said...

I'm going to be honest and say that even though I didn't like Reed's character I gave his story a chance and read it. If other people don't want to give this story a chance as well then it's their lost because this story is funny and lighthearted. I'm infatuated with the story! Please don't give up on the story or lose hope on it. The story is fine the way it is. Don't rush anything just do what you had planned out for the story.

7years

Racheal said...

Just wondering since you offered to put up pictures of WIll and Lucy from Everything will be alright. becuase its like my favorite story! keep up the good work with ryans story by the way!

Anonymous said...

i dont know people dont like the story because i love it. i think this one might be my #1 favorite story. and dont forget about your storys on fictionpress.