Sunday, April 1, 2007

Beyond the Grey Sky

I have started writing my next story Beyond the Grey Sky, which has two chapters posted already on AFF, and it follows Reed Simms through the last few months during his senior year of high school. While all of his friends are filling out college applications and talking about their impending futures, Reed is failing his classes and it is uncertain whether or not he will even graduate. He does not care though. He seems to have stopped caring about nearly everything in his life.

Cami Hall, his tutor, knows she shouldn't care about him but for some reason, seeing the great and almighty popular Reed Simms look so lost and sad confuses her and she tries her best to help him in any way she can. She doesn't know why she bothers. Reed seems to want anything but her aid but she's not letting him push her away. He needs someone in his life at the moment and though she's certain she's not that person, she finds herself becoming more and more involved with the boy she claims to hate more than anyone.

I hope that the first two chapters were to everyone's liking. Really, it is setting everything up, showing Reed's behavior in school and at home. I'm not sure what everyone thinks so please let me know.


Anonymous said...

Man, I'm so excited about your new story. After reading about Patrick and Maddy, Graham and Beth, I wanted Reed to find someone so bad I was like jumping on my chair waiting to see who you were going to write about. As much as I liked Ryan from the other story, I think I'll like Reed just as much, maybe even more, because I already love the plot of this new story. Ah man, what am I sitting around here for? I need to go and read those two chapters..

Anonymous said...

You gotta do a story about josh and charlette. man i love your storys. but please dont get mad when i say that the chapters are kind of short.