Sunday, June 1, 2008

A Slow Burn - Chapter Two

Thank you to everyone who read and reviewed the first chapter of A Slow Burn for me. It meant so much to me. I knew this story wasn't going to be as popular as some of my others but I am really enjoying writing this story and I love the dialogue between all of the characters. Chapter two is now posted on AFF.net so please read and review it for me. Thank you to Lauren for the piece of fan art below (please make me more lol) and also, there are pictures of Mike, Leah and Claire, Rob's brother and sisters. Please review and let me know what you think of the story so far. Thank you so much in advance.

Mike

Leah

Claire

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great chapter. I like the dynamic of the Moseley family. Hopefully we will get to see more of that, but also on Lauren's side as well.

I can't wait to see how Rob and Lauren's "relationship" develops.

J

BTW was George just a one-off, or will there be more mention of him?

Anonymous said...

I didn't read this chapter yet, AFF is in their " daily moment of downtime" ^^" but I'm already happy coz I always wanted to see one of your stories with Joshua Jackson even though he'll probably be a secondary character (that's how I pictured Ben of More than anyone before you gave us the picture of Nathan Phillips) Now I'll wait for the reopening of AFF XD
bulma-veggie

littlewiseone said...

I think Slow Burn is awesome! It combines the templeton 21 style we know and love with this gritty must have passion that we all wish we could experience at least once in our lives. It seems like you look into my life, see a void and fill it with your stories.

You probably aren't getting the response you were expecting because people were not expecting you to jump into another story with both feet so fast. I for one wasn't really expecting it and it was a pleasant surprise to say the least to see this story.

I really enjoyed the interaction with Rob and his siblings in the beginning of chapter 2 and I love how Rob and Lauren can't seem to get enough of each other in the end of the chapter. Please keep up the good work. I know once people pick up that you have this hot little story going the reviews will be off the charts.

Anonymous said...

It was cool to see more about Rob's family. I hope that we get to learn more about Lauren soon! I love this story so far. It is so passionate and hot. Keep it up!!

Anonymous said...

I liked this chapter because it gave a little more depth to Rob. His family dynamic is really interesting and I hope that we see more of his siblings in the future. I also like how he lies poorly. Hopefully that means that he'll continue to be completely honest in his relationship with Lauren. Great chapter.
-Steph

Amanda said...

Finally got a chance to read the new story. I love it. I can't wait to read chapter 3.