Monday, June 9, 2008

Answers to the Comments

Hi everyone! I am less than eager about it being Monday but too late now to go back. I was reading the comments people have been leaving for the previous post The Nicest Thing - Chapter Three and I get blown away every time by how everyone gets involved with my stories. I love how you connect with the characters and seriously. You guys make me smile every single day. There were a few comments that I wanted to address:

I have to day I was a little disappointed that Bret opened a branch of his dad's lawn service in Chicago. It just seems so boring, and I don't know average. He graduated from Penn right? Even his dad didn't want him to continue in his footstep so I was just disappointed to see that. Hopefully he is taking it to the next level and is a landscape engineer, or I don't know. (Sorry for anyone reading this who does landscaping or who's spouse is a landscaper)

Okay. You guys have to stop reading my mind and getting ahead of ourselves. This was going to be addressed in the next chapter because Corey and Ella will be having a phone conversation. Remember that Trevor was the one who informed everyone of what Brett was doing now and also keep in mind that he couldn't even remember what Ella was the assistant curator of. Trevor Scott is not big on details. Brett actually is a landscape architect and is designing parks and playgrounds. I will still be going into detail with this next chapter so everyone, stop reading my mind or sneaking peaks at my pages ahead of time.

Hey Kate I just thought of something. The characters are 22right and Joy had Millie at 18? If she was 6, wouldn't that make Joy and Trevor 24? and Corey and Ella 23?

As you can see, math was never my strong suit but the way I thought of it in my head, Millie is turning 6 in July. Since the story is in June at the moment, she is still 5 and Trevor and Joy have not had their birthdays yet either so they are still 23 as are Kyle and Brett. Corey, Ella and Monty are all 22. An upcoming chapter is actually Kyle's birthday, which should be an exciting chapter to both write and read.

There is also going to be a chapter of Kyle and Corey driving home to Lawrence. This chapter actually was going to be a one-shot before I decided to flourish this into an entire story so this chapter is, hopefully, going to be great with Kyle and Corey stuck in a car together for a long period of a time. Just thinking about it, I have the biggest dumbest grin on my face.

Thank you to everyone for all of the interest you take in my story. I'm not sure what I did to be so lucky and have such devoted involved readers but I love it. Now. Anymore questions?

44 comments:

michelle said...

My question is: when are you going to post the next chapter?

haha! I am hooked on this story, and only three chapters are posted! That's crazy! I can't wait for more! Your writing is amazing, which is why you have so many fans like me. It's easy to connect to the characters. It's like they're real people, which is a little scary it you think about it. Saying I've fallen in love with an imaginary character like Brett Dawson might qualify me as being mentally insane. HAHA!

Amanda said...

Nope but thank you for clearing that up. I'll just think their birthdays are later in the year.

littlewiseone said...

LOL, When I was writing that comment about Brett I laughted to myself. I honestly have to remind myself these are not real people. TOO FUNNY! But thanks for clearing that up because I really was wondering why. I can't wait to see how this story develops. I'm all in now. You can tell when I'm feeling well because my comments are like half a page long. :-)

Anonymous said...

I love this story!! And I have to say that I also really like A Slow Burn, its def different than your other stories, but I like its interesting to see a different style of story. I cant wait for the next chapter from either of them!

Chez said...

Thanks for your expansion of your thoughts, i knew it had to be something bigger than would be explained further down the track but i think with your writing style and idea development we become quite impatient!

Anyways,

eagerly awaiting the next chapter and waiting to see the how the conversation between ella and corey pans out!!

Cheers,

CHEZ

Anonymous said...

oh man, can't wait to read the rest of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D soo excitedd!

Anonymous said...

So I have a question: how many chapters do you anticipate this story having? Will this be a longer story like the Prettiest Thing was or a shorter sequel?

The reason I ask is because I really thought that your longer story was incredible and I believe your writing improved and developed a lot. So I've been hoping we'd see more longer stories from you where you can plan and organize a complex plot/character interactions like you did for TPT. Anyway, just curious about the length...

And I am with everyone else here - VERY much looking forward to the next installment. I am loving this story and am very glad to be back with some familar faces - loving Kyle in this one!!

Thanks Kate!
~HMC

naoise said...

I love this story. And Brett and Ella, Trevor and Joy and Millie.

I love ALL your characters. i can understand how people can fall in love with your characters, especially Brett. Oh God I am insane. HE'S NOT REAL!!! Hahaha..anyway I can't wait to read more and I was also curious to know how long TNT would be as TPT was an excellent story, plot everything.

Oh and I was wondering did you use a Norah Jones song for The Prettiest Thing title? I was listening to that song and its really nice (so is the Kate Nash ong for TNT) I was just wondering if it was the same one or maybe a different song entirely?

Anyway I'm just gonna shut up now and stop rambling.

naoise said...

oh and Prince Harry is by far much better suited to be Kyle than Rupert Grint. Thats just my opinion though. :]

Anonymous said...

Wow! I'm hooked again with your stories...can't wait what will eventually happen to Kyle and Correy..

Jean Annette

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