Wednesday, June 4, 2008

The Nicest Thing - Chapter One

Chapter one of The Nicest Thing is now posted on AFF.net so please read and review and let me know what you think of Corey and Kyle's story. I hope it is loved like The Prettiest Thing. I have posted pictures below of some of the main characters of this story - Corey, Kyle, Monty and Paul and Holly Carcetti, Corey and Monty's parents. I love the pictures because Paul and Holly really do look as if Corey and Monty are their kids.

I know I have three stories going on right now: The Nicest Thing, Nothing Else Matters, and A Slow Burn and I am going to update them whenever I feel inspired. I am not going to box myself in with one story and lose my focus or muse. So updates for the stories will come whenever I have both the time and inspiration to update them. I hope everyone is having a good week. I haven't heard from some of you that I usually do and you know I worry about you.

Corey

Kyle

Monty

Paul

Holly

6 comments:

Chez said...

Yay!

First one to comment on your new story!

Great start, already enjoying it and i know its always the same....

CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!

I was't too keen on Corey in TPT but this story will definitely change that!

Anonymous said...

I love this! This makes me wonder what will happen between Corey and Kyle...this one would focus more on them...

Its great to know that Brett and Ella are together...I love those this...

I love this characters, besides the wonderwall and the Reed bros...

I'm looking forward on the next chapter....pls. update...

Jean Annette

Anonymous said...

LOVE IT! I can't wait for more! I have a feeling I'm going to love this story.
-Michelle

Amanda said...

Wow, this is amazing I cannot wait to read more. I love it soo much and it's only the first chapter. I understand how someone in Corey's situation when you just think of someone out of the blue. Great job Kate and I cannot wait to read more.

Jen said...

I'm going to be honest, the first chapter didn't really pull me in like most of your other stories. I think it was because it seemed almost like a recapping of their relationship, which I'm sure would be beneficial for someone who hadn't read TPT, but for me it was almost redundant. (This is not meant to be harsh, because I do understand the necessity of that first chapter...I guess I'm just eager to jump right in.)

So by no means am I turned off by the story. I like the characters, and the possibilities for this story. I think once you get a little further into story, I will be pulled right back in.

J

littlewiseone said...

I'm SOOOOOO happy Brett and Ella made it. I admit I was worried at the end of The Prettiest Thing. I'm breathing a sigh of relief.

Ok I actually liked the recap on the relationship , but I feel it was more than just a recap and it made you feel how much of an impact that relationship had on Corey. When Kyle said he has been speaking Japanese since he was 10, and he aid "No offense Corey . . . But we really don't know anything about each other, do we." my hear kinda dropped. I know Corey was trying to protect herself from getting hurt again, but I don't know, it left me feeling a little I don't know melancholy I guess.

Keep up the good work. Now that I have had my little Ella update, I ready to jump into Corey's story with both feet right now.

Oh and Ash is Hot. I can't wait to see how this is going to develop.