Wednesday, June 18, 2008

The Potential of You and Me

Part II of III of The Potential of You and Me is now posted on Fictionpress.com so please read it and review it for me. I know many don't like it but thank you to those who have read it and let me know what you thought of Preston and Jane's new story. Thank you.

4 comments:

Tessa said...

I am going to go read it now but I am sure it is wonderful like your other stories.

Anonymous said...

Hey Kate,

I'm been working so I'm trying to catch up with your post at 2:00 in the morning eastern time. I'm a bit sadden that I miss reading "Battle" but I'm glad to see Jane and Preston back in a new version of "Ghetto Gospel". I'll see how far I can read at 2:00 in the morning and if I happen to fall asleep then I'll leave a review sometime today in the afternoon or later. Thank you and take care.

7years

Anonymous said...

hi im a big fan of yours but i have to admit this is your weakest story (sorry just trying to be honest). i think the original story was much better off, it seemed to leap of the page and demand your attention - this one is somewhat dry and mundane. However, i love the rest of your work, keep going and i hope you do get published girl!

Anonymous said...

Sorry didn't get a chance to review the first chapter I actually really like this re-write the first one was brilliant too but I like the slight change in characters this time.

Jane's dad is a lot more...extreme in this version way too harsh I think but I hate being told what to do so he was never going to sit well with me ;)

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Jane & Preston next, I hope she goes on that trip!

I wouldn't worry about reviews either they'll pick up! It's not all about reviews anyway as long as you're happy with it then that's what counts.

Update when you can!

L x