Thursday, June 19, 2008

The Nicest Thing - Chapter Five

Chapter five of The Nicest Thing is now posted on AFF.net so check it out for me. Read it, review it, and let me know what you think about it. It was a chapter entirely of Corey and Kyle and I hope it turned out alright. Next chapter, we will finally get a look into Corey and Kyle's families and I am excited to write that. I hope everyone has a good night.

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

I LOVE THIS STORY! So brilliantly written. I loved this chapter, even though the ending sucked (not your fault, Kyle and Corey's fault!) I loved it. It has passion, anger, love, affection, lust, guilt, and disappointment all wrapped into one chapter. Now, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! Not to be selfish, but I hope you find inspiration soon, cause I want more! haha!
-michelle

Anonymous said...

LOVE IT!!!!!! This chapter is awesome!!!!!!!!!! Seriously cant wait for the next chapter, more of Kyle and Corey!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Read and reviewed! Just wanted to give you an FYI: I've got some family coming into town for a couple of weeks, so I won't be able to read or review until after the 4th of July... Once everything is settled down, I'll get back into the groove! :)

twinklingdee

Jen said...

Great insight into Corey and Kyle from the past. Really well written chapter. Can't wait to read more and see them back in Chicago.

J

Anonymous said...

Finally i'm all caught up! I really love this story, Kyle & Corey have always been one of my favourite couples even when he was being an idiot in TPT ;) I like the kind of flashbacks, it's nice to see all those sweet moments between them.

I have a feeling this story is going to be very eventful! Corey & Kyle are so firey I don't think it's going to be smooth sailing but that's the fun part!

I'm not really liking Ash at the moment he seems kind of sleazy to me?! That's probably just me though!

Hope you're doing good today & update when you can :D

L x

littlewiseone said...

I think this chapter was inspired. Our girl has gotten it back. Actually you never lost it . . . YOU just thought you had lost it. I knew it hadn't gone anywhere. Like I said in another review I didn't see the stories you took down because you did it so dang-on fast. Anyway this chapter was so cute. I love how you once again gave a glimpse of the past relationship. (I like how you transition those) I love how although they have this passion you can tell that this time they both want it to be different . . . more. I can see the struggle. I wanted to smack Kyle for his last comment, but I have to say I LOVED IT. I loved it because it reminds you that although people grow up and change, we all have that little rough spot we that makes us, us, and needs some polish.

Keep up the INSPIRED work!

Amanda said...

Hey Kate brillent chapter once again. Sorry that I didn't read Portentical of You and Me because I was busy with work. I wish I could have read it. Anyways great job and I hope both Kyle and Corey find what they are truly looking for.

GirlFixer said...

I can't seem to review it over on AFF, so I'll comment here. That chapter gave me goosebumps... I adore the characters, and Prince Harry has now fully replaced Rupert Grint as Kyle in my head :]

And all of that was hard to type because my left pinky is all bruised and swollen :[

Paula

Anonymous said...

great interesting description onf their own opinions about their love story , I can't wait to read more. And see how they re gonna be OK again ^^
bulma-veggie

boysarefine said...

Awh. I love this! I love all of your stories lol. Your like my favorite author ever. =]
Hey quick question. What happened to The Prettiest Thing? Did you take it down, I can't find it anywhere. =[