Friday, June 6, 2008

A Slow Burn - Chapter Three

I was inspired suddenly today and I just kept writing and writing. What came of it was chapter three of A Slow Burn, now posted on AFF.net to be read and reviewed by all of my wonderful readers/fans. I love this chapter and I hope everyone enjoys it as well. Below are pictures of Susan Vandermark and Shane, Lauren's mother and brother, and Nanako, Mike's wife. Happy Friday everyone! I am so relieved that it is finally the weekend.

Shane

Susan

Nanako

4 comments:

Jen said...

Wow, I mean what can I say? I can see why you didn't want to stop writing, because I definitely didn't want to stop reading.

I really love these characters. I can't wait until you get further into this story and start bringing in conflicts for them. You've really set it up for them to have so many different places to go as far as characterization and plot. I'm really excited for this one.

In case I didn't gush enough...I think this chapter is great, this story is great, and I can't wait for more.

J

littlewiseone said...

Wow, you keep cranking out the hits. How do you have the energy. Can you bottle me up some and send it to Detroit?

Thanks for the super fast updates. I'm about to read it tonight, but I won't review until tomorrow. Keep up the fantastic work.

Amanda said...

Two words decribes this chapter: Brillent and Powerful. This is nothing I have read in the past. Everything is in pieces but put together at the same time, I'm not sure that makes sence but that's the best way I can think to decribe it. Well done once again Kate. Truly you have a brillent mind.

littlewiseone said...

Wow, in te elevator, the bakery and the bathroom, I'm happy the finally mad it to the bedroom. This is one Hot story. I wish I has half of the passion in my life right now. I would always be to shy for the elevator and bathroom but your story allows me to explore this latent fantasy. Keep Up the Hotness!