Saturday, April 19, 2008

The Prettiest Thing - Chapter Twenty-Seven

As promised, chapter twenty-seven of The Prettiest Thing is loaded on AFF.net and I have to admit. I absolutely love this chapter and I hope everyone else does too. Please read, review and let me know what you think. I can't wait to hear everyone's thoughts. This chapter just seemed to pour from my mind and fingers and I hope it is enjoyed. Below is a picture of Ella created by Lauren. Thank you so much, Lauren. I have more fanart to post and will continue to do so with each chapter update. I hope everyone has a wonderful Saturday and don't forget to review.

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

Well the drama is back! That was such a really great chapter. I love that everybody was mentioned in it as well.

Poor Joy, I know Trevor's being a big asshole but she does know how to change her mind quickly though! I'm so happy she wants to keep the baby, I hope she goes through with it now. I'm sure Trevor will come around again.

But Brett & Ella...can anything be easy for them?! Monty is the biggest ******* asshole in the whole world! WHY can't he accept he's not wanted?!? Poor Brett I guess he'll be in the doghouse now hope he's not though him & Ella have just got things right :(

Can't wait to see what happens next hope everything turns out ok for everyone! God & I thought my new years party was dramatic!! Update when you can.

L x

Anonymous said...

You... ARE A GENIUS !! I was listening to Prince's "Purple rain" at the same time, and I couldn't stop reading ! Everything is so realistic, the way Trevor reacts to Joy's decision, the way Monty is still trying to have Ella's attention, the way Brett reacts to that (not so sure Ella will be happy about that fight....)
Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
bulma-veggie

littlewiseone said...

I reviewed on AFF, but can I just say these daily updates are AWESOME! I don't know how you find the time and energy to write such fantastic chapter so quickly. Wow. I'm in awe of your talent and dedication. I know I say this all the time but I just want you to know I truly mean it.

Shanna

Amanda said...

That is a crazy ending. You think Monty would get the idea but with Brent punching him like that, you can tell that he clearly isn't going to get the message anytime soon, unless Ella stands up and say something. Poor Joy and Trevor, I hope everything will work out between them. What he should do is get on his knees and pop the question. Update real soon alright?

jas said...

hey i love this story and how you come up with all of these great ideas! so if anyone wants to tell you they are bad then they are really the ones that are bad. they all need to stop hating. (as my friends say) so please keep writing besause i for one and i know millions of others agree enjoy your writing.

Sara said...

Another great chapter! I loved how SO much went on all in the same location with each character totally absorbed in their own problems, yet still interacting. Amazing writing Kate, simply amazing!

I'm glad Joy wants to keep the baby, but it's so sad the way Trevor is dealing with it. At the same time, however, I understand his complete confusion and utter helplessness in the situation. Both Joy & Trevor just want what's best for the baby and their lives, but it might be difficult to accept that those are two (or even three) different things. I know it will all work out though - Kate always makes sure it does!

Well I guess Brett & Ella just aren't going to get a break, huh? I can't believe Monty! What an asshole! Dancing with Ella, okay, he's just ruffling feathers which is not good, but it's not the end of the world. Kissing Ella though, not cool. I completely support Brett's anger, but maybe not his actions. We obviously haven't seen it yet, but the reactions of Ella, Trevor, parents, the rest of the people there - not good... But hopefully Ella will see the motive behind his actions and not simply his actions. Only time (and updates!) will tell.

Great job, Kate. You just rock! :)

-Sara

Anonymous said...

Oh, wow. Brett decking Monty was pretty great. Monty just keeps getting digging himself a bigger hole. My opinion of him has definitely gone down. He needs to let Ella and Brett be together. Ella will probably be pretty peeved but hopefully it won't cause too many problems between her and Brett. I love their interactions like how Brett got asparagus just so he could give it to her. That made me smile.

I feel a little bad for Trevor. It's true that Joy keeps changing her mind, but I think she's just working through her own feelings and is walking such a tight rope in terms of not forcing Trevor into anything. I can't wait to see what Joy finally chooses for a baby name.
-Steph

Anonymous said...

I like how you ended this chapter.
Improvement on the previous one which I felt was hastily written. I could be wrong but I feel as though you should have taken more time to write that one..

Enjoyed the reads though.

Kina

Anonymous said...

WOW
That was certainly a dramatic ending. Can't wait to see everyone's reactions. Should be interesting...

Poor Trevor & Joy, hopefully things will work out for them.

And Brett was completely right in his actions. I never liked Monty. And this just made me hate him even more. He needs to move on and let Brett & Ella be together.

Great chapter Kate.

I admire your dedication and talent.