Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Hard to Concentrate

How is everyone this wonderful Wednesday night? Thank you to everyone who read and reviewed chapter twenty of The Prettiest Thing for me. I put so much of my time and effort into every chapter I write and all I ask is for people to hit that review button when they are done reading. It means the world to me and I love to hear what everyone thinks of my story. I hope when you read chapter twenty, you were able to see Joy and Trevor's complete shock and fear. I know I was repeating several things like how they were eighteen-years-old and how the pill had one job to do but I wanted to show that they were having the same reactions to what was happening and how they weren't thinking exactly clearly while this was going on. I hope I was able to get that across in the chapter. Also, remember that I already know exactly how this story is going to end and what directions it must take to get there.

Thank you to HMC for the black and white picture of Brett and Ella and thank you to Danielle for the picture of Joy and Trevor. I love every picture I get and I try to post as many as I can. Also, I know that the music isn't exactly a popular feature on this blog but I posted Joy and Trevor's song "Hard to Concentrate" by The Red Hot Chili Peppers. Give it a listen and pay attention to the lyrics. Let me know what you think of chapter twenty, of the song and of the pictures. Thank you to everyone in advance.

4 comments:

Danielle said...

loved the chapter, loved the pics, and even though the music isn't really my style... loved the lyrics! :)

Anonymous said...

Love the pictures! ;-) Now the song will have to grow on me but I did like the lyrics. Good stuff!
Hope you have a great day, looking forward to the next chapter! Take care.
~HMC

Anonymous said...

The song is definetely going to have to grow on my,but the lyrics are great for Trevor and Joy.Loved chapter 20,and the pics are perfect!

Team Brett! :)

~Alexandra

Anonymous said...

I love the song, pics and story. Chapter 20 was amazing!

I hope Brett & Ella get a song in this story too...:]

Can't wait for more <3