Thursday, February 28, 2008

The Prettiest Thing - Chapter Thirteen

Chapter thirteen of The Prettiest Thing is now posted on AFF.net so read it, review it, and let me know what you think. Thank you a thousand times to Lauren for making the piece of art of Ella below. Please enjoy the chapter. I am already working on chapter fourteen and I am also working on chapter four of Ghetto Gospel so I will let you know when there are more updates. Thank you.

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

One Word: AWESOME!!!

Shanna

Amanda said...

No words need to be said about how brillent it was.

Anonymous said...

fanstastic, I always repeat myself but you are an amazing writer ^^
Thank you so much =D
bulma-veggie
YEAH YEAH for Brett and Ella !! lol

KittyCat86 said...

I've just reviewed in adultanfiction.net. Great job! :D

Anonymous said...

Trevor and Joy are breaking my heart!! Joy needs to be honest with Trevor about how she has let herself down and he needs to tell her that to him, she is different then all the other girls.

Brett and Ella are so sweet. I hope this means that Brett is ready to stop playing hot and cold all the time? One can only hope. I have a feeling Trevor would be okay with them as a couple if they were honest with him upfront - if they are sneaking around and he finds out... oh, boy!

Can't wait for more!!
~HMC

GirlFixer said...

Brilliant! :D I loved this chapter. I'm really pleased that this is going to be a long story, because I don't want it to end anytime soon! :D

Paula

Anonymous said...

Amazing, enough said!!! I love Brett and Ella together.

Anonymous said...

I agree with alll the other reviews and I just had to review again. I love Brett and Ella, I loved this chapter and I love this story. I really hope Brett mans up and tells Trevor his feeling because it is the only way this will work. Can't wait for an update!

Shanna

Anonymous said...

Great chapter. I love Ella and Brett together. I hope Brett decides to tell Trevor or he really will lose his best friend and poor Trevor is already dealing with some problems of his own.

-Steph

Anonymous said...

Awwww that chapter was so sweet! I love jealous Brett & how Ella's making more of a move! Such a cute scene between the two of them.

But poor Trevor & Joy. So wanted them to get together i'm sure there's more from them yet though!

Great, great chapter, can't wait for more!

L x

Anonymous said...

I have been check for updates every hour on the hour. But . . . No Pressure! I just really love this story and I have since the 1st chapter.

Shanna