Chapter one of the new and improved The Prettiest Thing is now posted on AFF.net for your enjoyment. As I mentioned earlier, it is now copyrighted so I hope no one is stupid enough to try and steal it from me. I guess I am paranoid but I have never been more proud of a story and I worked months on it. I am still working on it - editing and adding/deleting things. Please read and review and I am so happy to post this back up. The first chapter isn't that different - just a few edits that had to be done. I hope everyone still enjoys it. Thank you.