Friday, July 25, 2008

The Flower Girl - Part IV

Part IV of The Flower Girl is now posted and I am so happy with this chapter. Please read it and review it for me. I love how it turned out. I had it perfectly in my head and I was worried about how I was going to get it out but I think I have succeeded and am very happy with the result. Please read and let me know what you think. I am having such a fun time writing this story and I am glad that there are a lot of you who love it as well. Happy Friday everyone!

4 comments:

Amanda said...

I love it! I love the fact we are just finding out what kind of a story this is. I love supernatural stories. Great job once again Kate. You are truly brillent in your writing. Update real soon.

Anonymous said...

This was a great chapter. I love how we got to see a little bit of Helen and Marlowe together. Helen is all kinds of creepy and I love it! This is a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
-Steph

littlewiseone said...

Intense! This is really a great chapter. I really like how you blended between the vision with real time, I guess you can say. Good job.

Anonymous said...

LOVE IT! It's great, it really is. I'm excited to see where this story is headed. Please post more soon. I want to know what happens next!

-Michelle

ps. Are you still going to repost The Prettiest Thing? I really want to read that again!