Wednesday, July 23, 2008

The Flower Girl - Part III

Part III of The Flower Girl is now posted on so please read it and review it for me. I would greatly appreciate it. You do not have to have an account with Fictionpress to review for me and I would love it if people read this story and enjoyed it like I know some of you are. Thank you.


Casey said...

I really love the story, it's got an awesome plot that I haven't read anywhere else and it's greatly written.

Haven't had the chance to review on Fictionpress yet (nor have I read chapter 3), because the website's all buggered up on my laptop, so I'm gonna have to wait 'till it works again, but I loved the first two chapters.

Anonymous said...

You are so incredibly talented that you blow my mind with each story. Your characters are each unique and original and I get so attached to them. I can't wait to read more about Brookston and Alice and Molly and Hawkin. This is such an original story. Please update, I absolutely adore this story and I have so many unanswered questions.

Anonymous said...

This story is so unique and amazing. I've never read anything like it. I love how it's not just a romantic story. It has a deep plot that is brilliant and dark. I am honestly begging you for more! I really want find out more about the characters and their backgrounds.
The only bad thing about this story is that I'm now getting attached to the characters! I love them already! Please write more and update soon!

Amanda said...

This is the most uniqueness story I have ever read Kate. You are doing a great job, I can even see this turning into a action pack movie lol. I cannot wait what's in store next.

Anonymous said...

i absolutly love this story it is turning out to be my favourite one of yours so far! usually this type of story annoys me because its just not that believable, however i like this plot and it really is believable. this story just shows that you are amazingly talented!

littlewiseone said...

Ask me how many Science Fiction Books I have read in the past. I'll tell you zero. But I'm really enjoying this story. I was holding my breath by the end of the chapter. I can't wait to see what is next. You are awesome.

Anonymous said...

Hey Kate,

I just heard a song on the radio called "Seventeen forever" by Metro Station. I think that pop song apply to the "Prettiest Thing" story. It's a cute song. By the way have an excellent Friday.