The Beginning of Eden - Chap. 2

I know no one really has time anymore but if you could, please read and review chapter two of The Beginning of Eden, now posted on Fictionpress.com for me. I would greatly appreciate it. You do not need an account to review on that site so if you could let me know what you think of it, it would really mean a lot to me. Thank you. Also, I am trying my hand at making art since no one got back to me so hopefully, I will have some stuff done for Ghetto Gospel, The Beginning of Eden, and The Flower Girl to post at a later date. I am not at an artist at all but I liked the Preston/Jane icon I made for my Fictionpress account. Maybe, with practice, I can do something else. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I really do love hearing from all of you.