Thursday, October 16, 2008

The Beginning of Eden

Ugh. I just sat down and read through the first two chapters of The Beginning of Eden and this story is not coming out the way I wanted it to. It reminds me of my first few attempts at Ghetto Gospel - which I all hated before I was able to write the final version. I really hate the version of The Beginning of Eden I have posted so I am going to delete it, work on it and then post it again. If I am not 100% happy with the writing, I think that is shows and everyone can tell. To those who have not read it, do not worry. I will come back to this story once I am happy with it. I really want to get this story right before I post it again. Thank you everyone and Happy Thursday. It is 6:25 in the morning and I am far too happy right now. lol Talk to you soon.


Anonymous said...

Nooooo!! I loved that story!!!
Why would you do that, it was great!!
I didnt see any problems with the writting, but I'm not a writer, so I guess I'm not the better judge.
Now please dont go all neurotic with this story and take ages to post it again, because that would make people unhappy! Especially Me! lol
Well, you do what you gotta do, han?
Ps: Bette Davis Eyes is my nem favorite song!

Anonymous said...

Loool well you're the boss,do what you think is the best , I sent you by mail 2/3 pictures for Ghetto gospel and Flower Girl (and I just realized I forget the "the" in the drawing ^^")
Have a nice day !!

Hina said...

How did you manage so much happiness so early in the morning? lol!

Well, I'm glad that you're happy but I as well as many of your other readers are probably upset with the decision to delete this story, but if you're not happy with it, then it'll be a lot harder to finish writing it.

I know from can't finish writing something you're not pleased with.

Anyway, I hope you post something up in the near future...possibly even more one-shots or a chapter of "The Flower Girl"? :-)

Take care!