Saturday, October 4, 2008

Ghetto Gospel - Chapter Six

Chapter six of Ghetto Gospel is now posted up on Fictionpress.com so as always, I would be appreciative beyond words if you could read it and leave me a review. Preston and Jane are becoming one of my favorite couples that I have created and I want others to like them too. This chapter, for some reason, took me longer than usual to write so I am hoping that it turned alright. I also hope that everyone is having a great weekend.

5 comments:

Amy said...

Amazing!! I am so in love with this story. I check your blog & this site DAILY to see if you've found time to update. I'm so addicted. This story ROCKS and I'm so glad you found the inspiration to write it.

In particular to this chapter - SO worth the wait! You have done an awesome job creating the characters of Jane & Preston & their relationship. It feels so real! And (the girl in me here) it's SO CUTE!! He came to her rescue when she was drunk off her a** in a club bathroom even after their "fight"... Aw :) Brownie points for Preston.

Can't wait for the next update! SO EXCITED!!

Tessa said...

I love this story!!!....You r Amazing Writer..... Love the Jane and Preston moments...so sweet at the end, when she sayed I Love u........can't wait for more.

Anonymous said...

I absolutely adored that chapter!! I'm really loving the relationship between Jane & Preston can't wait to see where they go from here!

Hope you update real soon, love this story so much!

L x

Amanda said...

I'm hanging on the edge of my seat. That was brillent. I cannot wait to read the next installment.

By the way, I love the paradox chapter titles.

Anonymous said...

I would say that this story is utterly amazing and I love love love it. I'm sorry I didn't have to time to review because of school and all, but I love Jane and Preston's relationship...I love them period.

This story is my favorite. Can't wait for more. Please update soon.

~Dove~