Friday, December 14, 2007

The Prize - The End

I just posted Chapter 15, the last chapter, of The Prize on AFF.net and though I know no one was looking forward to this story ending, the story had to come to a close sometime. There is a lot of brotherly interaction in this chapter between Ryan and Tyson and Ryan's way of thinking may be hard to follow but it is very much like his personality so keep that in mind. Also, the ending may not feel like an ending at all but like most of my stories, I don't like putting a stamp of finality onto my couples. Tyson and Amy are just beginning, not ending. I like the ending. I think it stays true to Tyson's character perfectly and Amy has definitely grown and matured. I just hope everyone sees all of these things as they read it. I'm quite proud of this chapter - especially the Ryan and Tyson talk in the beginning. So please read, review and most of all, enjoy.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Just read the last chapter, and I loved it. It was a perfect ending. It leaves room for interpretation of what will happen in their lives next.

Of course should there be a oneshot with your views of where they end up or another story sometime in the future where they play a secondary role, I would definitely not be disappointed. Afterall, I am still interested in hearing Shelby's story. But that's just a thought...

J

Anonymous said...

Thanks for posting this chapter right before the holidays! I loved the ending. I think it's really really sweet. Thanks for taking your time to write for us. Happy holidays!

Anonymous said...

I'M SO EXCITED. I'M ABOUT TO READ THE CHAPTER, BUT IT IS ALMOST WITH A HEAVY HEART. i DON'T KNOW WHAT IT WAS ABOUT THIS STORY BUT IT REALLY PULLED AT ME. I WILL HATE TO SEE THESE CHARACTERS GO, BUT I WANT TO SEE HOW IT "ENDS." I'LL REVIEW HERE ANDS ON AFF AFTER I READ. THANKS SO MUCH FOR POSTING.

SHANNA

Anonymous said...

I'm back. Okay, that was AWESOME. I'm happy that Tyson was able to understand what he really felt for Amy and find a way to communicate it even if he wasn't ready to, or couldn't saw the words. I love that Amy was able to accept him as who he was, with all flaws and love him anyway, as understand that there is more than one way to communicate. I love that he understands that he has to give a little of himself because she gives so much of herself. I'm happy he didn't blame her for losing the fight. I love your writing because you know how to invoke emotion in your readers. You are very talented, and I can't tell you that enough. I hope one day you have a one shot of this couple and we can see what he has really learned about communicating with Amy!

Shanna

strawberris said...

cries .....i dont feel like its an ending. im still craving more of the story and its characters. this is an ending that i cant admit to liking because i feel like i've only had a little of what there is to know. the ending is sweet but like u said its only a begining to amy and tysons relationship.

Anonymous said...

"Tyson and Amy are just beginning, not ending"

Exactly and that's beautiful ^^ Even though I would love to see more of their future together it's a perfect ending...

bulma-veggie french fan

KittyCat86 said...

I just loved this story! I particularly loved the talk between Ryan and Tyson and the ending. It was really sweet :D

Thank you for making a bad day become so much better...

Christina said...

yay!!!! I love happy endings!!!!