Wednesday, December 5, 2007

Blackout - Part II

I decided to post another chapter to the original one-shot Blackout on Fictionpress.com. I hope you read it and enjoy it. Also, today, during the kids' naps, I was able to write the last few paragraphs of The Prize and complete my outline. I changed a few things so I needed to rework the original idea. There are going to be two chapters left and though the last chapter didn't get as much attention as I thought it would considering how many people ask me to update, I am going to start working on chapter 14 and hopefully have it up within the next few days. In the meantime, check out the second chapter, and possibly the last one, of Blackout. Thank you!

Mark

Jenna

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi!
I loved the new chapter. At first I was a little annoyed that Jenna was all shy and not talking, but it really added extra oomph to her final lines. I really enjoyed it.

I'm sorry that the last chapter of The Prize didn't get the response you expected. I suppose with Christmas coming and exams (for me personally), I didn't get a chance to tell you how much I loved the chapter. I think you chose the absolute best way to deal with story line.
Thanks
-Steph

Anonymous said...

You are not going to believe this. I don't think I believe it. I went to Fictionpress.com, and looked at you profile, for what must be the 1st time since August because there is a story on there I've never read."You Call it Madness, But I Call it Love" At least I don't think I have. I'm printing it out now so I can read it, but I had to comment as I do my Happy Dance.

Shanna

Anonymous said...

I really liked the new chapter of "Blackout", but surely their story is not done, right? I think you can wrap it up in one more chapter... although if you want to continue it further, I'll definitely read it as I love these two.

J

Anonymous said...

Hi Kate:

Of course I loved the last chapter of The Prize. It is my favorite story so I enjoy each and every chapter. I just do not want to badger you about updating it so I slowed down on "reviewing".
I also enjoyed "Blackout" on Fictionpress.
Thanks for writing!
Judy

Anonymous said...

I really loved the new chapter of Blackout, but that cant be the last chapter right?!

I loved the last chapter of The Prize and I cant wait for the next one to be up. Thank you so much for writing even though I imagine you must be so busy! I think I speak for all your loyal readers when I say that we really appreciate it!

Anonymous said...

I loved the latest chapter of The Prize. Though I do not review as often as I used to, I still love it and all of your work!!

I hope to see more soon!!

Joee

Anonymous said...

I just wanted to tell you how much I love your stories. I tend to lose track of time, and become late because I love them so much. Like this morning when I read the second part of Blackout.
Have a wonderful day.

Anonymous said...

I loved the last chapter of the prize and I love your update on Black out !!!

bulma-veggie

Anonymous said...

Fairy Tale! Update Fairy Tale! I hope Black out is not done yet it was an awesome chapter! Can't wait for the prize either!

Amanda said...

I hope that Blackout isn't done yet because how does he feel? I know that you have alot on your plate right now but I do hope when you have the time that you can add another chapter.