Wednesday, February 18, 2009

When Night is Almost Done - Chap. Four

Hi everyone. Chapter four of When Night is Almost Done is now posted on so read it if you are interested and let me know what you think. Thank you ahead of time for everything.

*I just wanted to clarify something because it seems that some readers are confused. This story takes place in 1952. I thought I had made that clear throughout the chapters but I suppose it was not as clear as I thought it was. I just did not want people to be confused anymore. Thank you.


Naoise said...

Hi, wow that was quick. I'm going to read now and review but I was listening to some music earlier and since you seem to like getting new music to listen to...

The Saturdays song 'Issues' kind of reminds me of Poppy and Justin.
I also like Damien Dempsey's song 'Your Pretty Smile', I think it's nice for Poppy and Justin too.

I also love Duke Special's song 'Sweet Sweet Kisses'. I can imagine it for any of your stories, it's so happy and romantic and sweet.

Anonymous said...

Ahh, an amazing chapter! I like how Sam seems to be a very nice young man who is sort of in the same position as Beth: being "forced" into a marriage. I also cant wait to hear about this Emily character, a deceased sister???

Please update soon as you left us with a cliffhanger, although I am positive she will come out of it fine. Thank you so much!

Anonymous said...

I actually like this story more than i thought that i would because i am usually too much of a chicken to read anything mentioning ghosts.
I am a bit confused though, im taking it that this Emily character is his dead sister not fiance/wife/girlfriend?

Anonymous said...

Wow, that was great. So much mystery! I really love the chapter, and the story plot itself. It sounds like its going to be great. Also, I like that your putting up some stories from your AFF account onto FP. Great idea!