Tuesday, February 10, 2009

A Pocketful of Poppies - Part Twelve

As the title of the post suggests, part twelve of A Pocketful of Poppies is posted on Fictionpress so please check it out for me and let me know what you think. It took me forever to write for some reason but I hope that it turned out alright. Please review and put my slightly paranoid mind at ease. I also hope everyone is have a good week so far.

Poppy

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

The pictures you posted are great, and so was this chapter! She smiles! Yes! I'm loving this story so much more than Wonderwall, not that that story was bad at all. This is just so much deeper and powerful. I'm a sucker for Justin and Poppy. Great job with this!
~Michelle

Anonymous said...

She let him in. She hugged him. She smiled!! *sighs* Absolutely loved it.
-Kellie
P.S. Hot fantasy shower scenes FTW!!

Rocio said...

The hug was totally the appropriate step! Hugs are awesome and convey so much: understanding, comfort, acceptance, kindness.. w/o being lascivious or overly sexual. It was a great step in their slowly burgeoning relationship.

And finally, a real smile! Not even her family gets those so Justin's doing something right. I'm so excited to see where this goes since it's different from the original story. Thanks for updating!

Side note: Bitter-sweet to have The Prettiest Thing end. It's one of my favorites- you did an incredible job on it.

Anonymous said...

SHE SMILES !!! lol that was a great chapter, exporing their burgeoning relationship ^^
Can't wait to read where it gos from now , and by the way I re-read The prettiest thing, nice to live that happy end again, and of course I had to read the oneshot about their last summer before college ^^
bulma-veggie

Anonymous said...

Finally she smiled!! I am so happy that she's starting to feel comfortable around Justin. Now, she has her friends to deal with and I agree with your Author's Note. This is not the kind of story that needs a love triangle.

Chase in love with Poppy? Ewww...that's like incest to me lol!!

Good chapter and the pic are awesome!!

~Dove~