Saturday, February 14, 2009

A Pocketful of Poppies - Part Thirteen

Please read part thirteen of A Pocketful of Poppies now posted on Fictionpress. I would greatly appreciate it as always. Also, if you have time, please let me know what you think of it. I know everyone is extremely busy but it would mean a lot to me. Thank you in advance.

Poppy smiling

8 comments:

Nyah_87 said...

I love the picture,and she is exactly how I imagine Poppy.Love the story becuase the characters seem so real;they have real problems and issues and are more identifiable that way.

XOXO

Anonymous said...

I'm so glad that yo updated, I check back every day to see if you have updated. This is my favourite story right now of yours, I like that you are re-doing this story with a much darker Poppy and Justin. They are by far the best couple you have created, closely followed by, of course, Ella and Brett. I was just wondering, where do you get the pictures from? Are they actresses/actors? I only ask because so far I do not recognise any of them. :)

Anonymous said...

Kate, this story has got to be one of the best stories you have on both sites. It is amazing. I know that I had said that The Flower Girl was my favorite, but this beats it by a long shot. Seriously. I can't get over how amazing the last chapter was. They are so real, and it's so much better than Justin and Poppy in Wonderwall. These characters are fabulous. Please write more soon, and phenomenal job so far.
~Michelle

Paula said...
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Paula said...

I'm enjoying this story SO much, your writing just keeps getting better and better.

Poppy and Justin are definitely one of my favourite couples, but I do still have a major soft spot for Brett and Ella (just noticed you'd uploaded more chapters of The Prettiest Thing to FP, so I shall read that later, too. Oh and of course When Night Is Almost Done.)

Hope you're well Kate! :]

Paula

Anonymous said...

I love this picture of Poppy, for some reason this is the one that really sticks with me. The other is good but this one is fantastic. Again, great chapter.
-Brie

Anonymous said...

Love the picture. Like I said on Fictionpress. When I found out that Gretchen was doing the...you know what? I was shocked LOL!! I thought it would be Justin sleeping with Jennifer AGAIN! But..I was wrong.

Love the chemistry between Poppy and Justin though. I love it and it shows that they are real human beings when it comes to dealing with personal issues. Now, they have each other to count...aaaannd Gretchen has Nate to count on also LOL!!

Luv ya!

~Dove~

Rocio said...

This chapter was def one of my favorites! Gretchen gets a 'mmmhm' and a *snap* for doing her thing. The surprise of finding out that it wasn't one of the guy's wet dreams but Gretchen and Nate was priceless. Good job!

As for Poppy and Justin, intensely tender and poignant. I can't really think of the proper words to describe why I liked it so much.

The plagiarism problem sucks, sorry you had to go through that. Have you thought about copyrighting your work so that you have legal standing in case someone tries to rip you off again? I hope everything works out well.