Tuesday, October 16, 2007

The Prize Update

I just posted the next chapter of The Prize on AFF.net so be sure to check it out and review for me. I actually am unsure about the update so please give me your honest opinion about it. I kind of have a busy rest of the week and weekend coming up so I'm not sure when I can update any of my stories again until next week sometime. Remember to just be patient with me and in the meantime, read The Prize.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Kate,
Thank you for updating the Prize so quickly. I absolutely loved the new chapter - it was very hot ;) I liked how you incorporated a little bit of drama but kept them happy and even in love. I especially like how Tyson is now calling Amy, "Ames." I think it just shows how their relationship has changed and transformed. Loved the chapter and can't wait for more. Have a nice rest of the week and good weekend :)
-Steph

Anonymous said...

I really liked the content of this chapter. You can already see some looming issues. I can't wait to see the couple's interactions with the families.

There were a few missed prepositions and pronouns, as well as some oddly worded phrases. But grammatical issues aside, it is a good chapter. I look forward to the next one.

J

Christina said...

yay! I loved the updated chapter! It made me love the characters even more than I already do! Keep up the GREAT work!

Anonymous said...

Wonderful chapter ^^
Their relationship is on the good way !!

bulma-veggie (french fan)

Anonymous said...

hi kate!

i loved the new chapter! (:

-eipur

Anonymous said...

the new chapter was absolutely great. love the development. wonderfully written :) -jL