Tuesday, October 16, 2007

The Prize Update

I just posted the next chapter of The Prize on AFF.net so be sure to check it out and review for me. I actually am unsure about the update so please give me your honest opinion about it. I kind of have a busy rest of the week and weekend coming up so I'm not sure when I can update any of my stories again until next week sometime. Remember to just be patient with me and in the meantime, read The Prize.


Anonymous said...

Hi Kate,
Thank you for updating the Prize so quickly. I absolutely loved the new chapter - it was very hot ;) I liked how you incorporated a little bit of drama but kept them happy and even in love. I especially like how Tyson is now calling Amy, "Ames." I think it just shows how their relationship has changed and transformed. Loved the chapter and can't wait for more. Have a nice rest of the week and good weekend :)

Anonymous said...

I really liked the content of this chapter. You can already see some looming issues. I can't wait to see the couple's interactions with the families.

There were a few missed prepositions and pronouns, as well as some oddly worded phrases. But grammatical issues aside, it is a good chapter. I look forward to the next one.


Christina said...

yay! I loved the updated chapter! It made me love the characters even more than I already do! Keep up the GREAT work!

Anonymous said...

Wonderful chapter ^^
Their relationship is on the good way !!

bulma-veggie (french fan)

Anonymous said...

hi kate!

i loved the new chapter! (:


Anonymous said...

the new chapter was absolutely great. love the development. wonderfully written :) -jL