Thursday, August 7, 2008

The Beauty and the Tragedy - Chapter 3

Finally! Sorry this took me so long but chapter three of The Beauty and the Tragedy is finally posted on AFF.net so please head over there, read it and review it for me. Also, if you guys get a chance, listen to “Thirteen” by Big Star - the main song of this chapter. It will also become the main song of the story and will be referenced in many more chapters. I tried to find it on YouTube but I could only find fanvids or covers so if you want to listen to it and ignore the fanvid then you can at YouTube. I hope everyone likes the chapter. For some reason, it felt as if it took me forever to write and I don't even know if its good or not. I am so happy tomorrow is Friday. Hopefully, I will be able to update again soon.

4 comments:

littlewiseone said...

Thank you for my late night surprise. I will review tomorrow, but I'm very excited to read it tonight.

littlewiseone said...

Such a short chapter, but it was good. I'm happy they are starting to at least be friends, and you can see the attraction bubbling. Can't wait for more. Have a great Weekend!

Anonymous said...

Aww I liked it! It's good to see the build up of their relationship can't wait to see where it goes from here! Update when you can!!

L x

Anonymous said...

I'm actually exhausted! Have been reading through all the wonderwall series for the past week plus so that I could refresh my memory before starting on The Beauty and The Tragedy... not to forget the one before on Wallace and Hannah. Sorry I'm forgetting names now but I've gone through all of it! Not sure which story I like best now though. Definitely been confused! It may be a tie between Abe/Cecilia and Amelia/Casey for now. Will be following this one and give my opinion later on.

Just to point out one thing though - in chapter one of TBTT - there was a part when you said 'their flight which was leaving in 6 hours' or something like that in reference to Abe and Cecilia when in actuality, they were taking seperate flights.. I know I'm going into too much detail but that was bothering me for a while. Liking the story so far though.

Question though: is it common for girls in the states to sleep in tank tops/boy shorts at night? I'm just curious, coming from a different part of the world.

Kina