Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Nothing Else Matters - Chapter Four

I have channeled my writer block frustrations into my character of Will Kelly from Everything Will Be Alright and I was able to update chapter four of Nothing Else Matters, which centers around Will Kelly and Lucy Banks. There is some sex in this chapter so be forewarned. Please read and review it for me. Thank you.

Lucy and Will


Paula said...

That was actually perfect :] Will and Lucy have always been high on the list of my favourite 'Kate Couples' so it was lovely to read them again.

I was listening to 'To Build A Home' by The Cinematic Orchestra toward the end of the chapter. It really went - if you haven't already, you should give it a listen :]


Anonymous said...

Amazing!!! Such a great chapter - I loved the interaction between Will & Lucy! You did such an amazing job on that chapter.

Like Paula said - perfect!!

Hina said...

Oh my GOSH! I have to agree with Paula as well...absolutely perfect!

I love how he types the question on his laptop and she replies by typing on it as well---so sweet!

I don't know how to describe what this chapter made me feel...it really made me feel euphoric!

littlewiseone said...

YOUR'E BACK, YOUR'E BACK! Thank was great. You do a great job having just enough info about the previous story to remind your readers what happened in the last story for new readers without giving too much information to bore your regular readers. Also, that was a tasteful love scene, I was wondering if they were going to be hanging from chandeliers after that warning.

Very Good! Thank You. and Welcome Back

Anonymous said...

Hey Kate!

That was a very sweet and memorable chapter. I've always had a soft spot for these two, Lucy and her vulnerabilities just tugged at my heart in their original story. I am glad to see that being with Will for a while has been good for her.

I also loved Will's recognition of how special and important she is and that he never wants to lose that -such a sweet, fitting gesture to type out his proposal like that.

All around, very well done and thanks ever so much for sharing it with us! Enjoy your day!

Anonymous said...

I am so glad that you're doing this story. I absolutely love catching back up with some of your older couples. Will and Lucy were perfect. I could definitely see Will proposing the way he did and Lucy responding likewise. As everyone else has said, it was perfect. Thanks Kate!


Anonymous said...

Aww that was such a sweet story! I love the two of them as a couple!

It was nice to see how much Will depends on her & the proposal was the cutest thing ever! I really loved it :D

Can't wait to see more on your other couples!

L x