Friday, March 21, 2008

The Prettiest Thing - Chapter Seventeen

Chapter seventeen of The Prettiest Thing is now posted on AFF.net so everyone knows the drill. Please read and review for me. I hope the chapter turned out okay. I have been sick with the flu for the past few days so most of the chapter was written while I was under the influence of medication. Despite that, I hope the chapter is still enjoyed. Also, thank you to Alessandra for the art she made of Brett and Ella below.

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Kate, amazing chapter. I loved it. I just wanted to say that I think the song "Bye Bye Love" by Rachael Yamagata always reminds me of Brett and Ella.

Can't wait for an update!

alessandra

Anonymous said...

That was such a great chapter!!

Poor Ella though would Brett ever cop himself on for god's sake! I doubt Trevor knows what's really going on but that was such a good ending!

I really loved the moments between Lyla & Andy and Trevor & Joy, so sweet the two of them! I feel bad for Lyla though too, all the drama I can hardly keep up!

Hope you're feeling better , look after yourself. Can't wait for more!

L x

Anonymous said...

Hey Kate,

I feel bad for pressuring you to update when you were ill. I hope you're feeling better today. A flu is not a simple cold therefore please get plenty of rest. I mean it Kate. No more stressing yourself out in writing this other chapter until you fully recover. You need to rest and take care of yourself. I hope I didn't sound bossy I'm just concern. Thank you.

7years

Anonymous said...

Fantastic chapter with another brilliant cliffangher !!! Can't wait to see what will happen !! I hope you will be Ok and hat it wasn't too hard for you this weekend ^^

bulma-veggie
PS: I sent you a mail^^ .

Anonymous said...

feel better soon!

oh and i love chapter 17 what'll happen next? :O

take care of yourself

x

Amanda said...

Incrediable chapter Kate. I love how everything is getting to a point where push must come to shove. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Take care of yourself Kate.

Anonymous said...

sorry to hear that you are under the weather! I hope that you are feeling better and getting enough rest (and fluids!). :) Now that you have fifteen other mothers, just wanted to say that it was another great chapter! And I agree with 7years... get better first!

dee

Anonymous said...

Another cliff hanger! Wow, this was another good chapter. How do you keep them coming. I didn't know you were sick. I was just very sick, as you know. And I don't know how you wrote a chapter like that, while having the flu. Man, if I could have an 8th of your talent and drive I don't know what I would do with myself.

Now only if you are feeling better, and the kids and your husband are ok, and you don't have to cook Easter dinner, and it is no hardship to you at all, Update this weekend. PLEASE.

Shanna

Anonymous said...

Ok, I just have to say it is so not fair to leave it like that. I want to know!!! I have to know!!! It was awesome though. But don't update if you aren't feeling up to it. But if you are...

KittyCat86 said...

Hi. I've just come back in town and read both chapters. I've already left a review in AFF.net.

I feel sorry for Ella and I hope Trevor finally knows.

Thanks for the updates:D

Anonymous said...

You're such an amazing writer. At the end of chapter seventeen, I actually felt my stomach drop along with Brett's. Poor Ella. She really doesn't deserve to have Brett playing with her emotions even if he's not doing it purposely.

-Steph