Sunday, March 9, 2008

Piper's Hidden Kiss

I have no idea where this story came from. It was only suppoed to be a one-shot but then I decided to break it into two parts. The second part will be posted in a few days. Piper's Hidden Kiss is posted on Fictionpress.net under my Templeton21 account and I would love everyone if they checked it out for me and reviewed it. Please let me know what you think of it. I would greatly appreciate it. Thank you so much in advance. Below are pictures of Piper and Chris. Thank you again.

Piper

Chris

11 comments:

Nenos said...

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Anonymous said...

It's a cute story. I liked the hidden kiss when you used it with Will and Lucy. But here it is different. It is a sweet thing her less than perfect mother shared with her.

I look forward to the next chapter.

J

Anonymous said...

I really like it and can't wait to read part two. Your writing always seems to draw me in whether it's 30chapters or two. You have the talent to make your characters come alive and I'm just so in awe of that skill. Piper could be this one-dimensional character but already we can see some of her history that has made her the womam she is - a hopeless romantic waiting for her perfect first kiss with a less than perfect mother to thank. So thank you Kate for bringing your characters alive and sharing them with your fans.

-Steph

Anonymous said...

I'ma already in love with this story ^^ congrats !!

“You know, eventually, I’m going to get tired of chasing you.” >> love that sentence !!

bulma-veggie french fan

Amanda said...

Well done, this is brillent. I love that quote ' Those who increase knowledge increase sorrow.' Now I want to read the second half. I cannot wait to read

Anonymous said...

I'm loving it, just like all of your other works. Your are an amazing writer.

I can't wait for the next part.

Joee

Anonymous said...

What a cute story! I have been so sick. Unable to read because of the ponding in my head but I was very happy when I could read for a few minutes to be treated to this story. Well done.

Shanna

Anonymous said...

Aww what a cute story! It's a great start once more, I like the idea of the hidden kiss like with Will & Lucy. I've had such a bad day so thanks for the cheer up can't wait for more!

L x

KittyCat86 said...

Just one word to describe it: AMAZING! I loved it! The idea of the hidden kiss is just wonderful.
When are you updating the 2nd chapter? I can't wait to read it:D

Anonymous said...

Hey Kate,

I hope you're doing well. I've already reviewed chapter 14 and 15 of "The Prettiest Thing" and now I'm going to read and review "Piper's Hidden Kiss". I love it when you go crazy updating stories and creating them. I think the two people you pick to betray Piper and Chris are just cute. That boy is adorable. I think I'm free to read anything you post this week hint, hint, especially "The Prettiest Thing" chapter 16 to be more blunt, haha. Have a good night.

7years

Wilhelmina said...

People should read this.