Tuesday, March 4, 2008

The Prettiest Thing - Chapter Fourteen

The newest chapter of The Prettiest Thing has just been posted on AFF.net. This is the longest chapter so far of the story and it is one of my favorites. A lot happens and sets things up and I love it. Please read it and review it for me. Please let me know what you think of it. Below is a picture of Harper Cannon, Brett's grandmother, who is introduced in this chapter and once again, a billion thanks to Lauren for the fanart she made of Andy. Thank you so much Lauren.

Harper

12 comments:

Stacy said...

OMG....I LOVE IT! Kate, that chapter was awesome, especially the little throwbacks to your other stories! That was so cute! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Stacy

Anonymous said...

Yea! I haven't read it yet but I'm just excited to see an update. I'm not even going to watch American Idol, I'm going to read this update! Now that is excited for me.

Shanna

Anonymous said...

More than Anything is one of my all time favorites, so thanks for the mini update. Loved it! Do you realize how talanted you are?
Shanna

Amanda said...

That was a brillent chapter it is one of my favorites! But I am worried about Lyla. I hope she alright

Anonymous said...

Hey there!
Is it just me or was about every character possible in that chapter!?! How cool to get to see everyone interacting like that, thank-you! Looking forward to more goodness.
~ HMC

Danielle said...

Kate that was awesome!!! I love the Brett/Ella Action!!! Please update asap!!
Also please please update ghetto gospel! I'm dying to find out what happens next!

Anonymous said...

ouah just ouah !! fantastic chapter, I definitely love Ella , she is fantastic, and Brett, oh he is so sweet =D but what a cliffangher at the end, lol, finally the parents are gonna meet Andy but not in great circonstances apparently ...
Thank you so much for showing us a little bit of Ben & Olivia's life, My fav' couple, I wish we could have seen their wedding, thanks again for telling us that =D
bulma-veggie

GirlFixer said...

I loved the reference to your other stories, that made me smile! :) And Brett and Ella are just so darn cute.

BUT! What's going to happen with Lyla?!

Another fantastic chapter.

Paula

Anonymous said...

That was such a good chapter! Brett & Ella just melt my heart everytime & I can't wait to see how Trevor & Joy's big talk goes.

I think it just seems to be but I find Monty kind of annoying sorry!! There's just something I don't like about him.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens next especially with Lyla which was a nice ending btw!

I loved the mention of the other characters too! Brilliant chapter can't wait for more.

L x

Anonymous said...

Definitely my favourite chapter thus far. I absolutely adored the references to Olivia and Ben and Carrie and Andrew. That was very cleverly done. I can't wait to see what you write next!

-Steph

Anonymous said...

amazing chapter. such a shock at the end though, hope Lyla is alright...

well done!

Anonymous said...

Great chapter.

It sucks that Lyla's parents are probably going to find out about her marriage, just not from her.

It seems like both Trevor and Ella are kind of in the same place with their relationships in this chapter. Neither really know what is going on or what is going to happen. At least Trevor can be open with his...

Anyway, good job. I look forward to the next chapter.

J