Monday, January 28, 2008

The Prettiest Thing - Chapter Four

The Prettiest Thing has been updated with its fourth chapter on AFF.net so read it, review it, let me know what you think about it. I hope this story is shaping up to be alright. I am writing this story with details and intense feelings and I am not sure whether or not I am succeeding at it. The music in this story is very important as usual - being almost another character so listen to the songs on YouTube or another site if you have the time to. Also, if anyone has any fanart for this story, please email me. With all of my time going into writing, I haven't had time to search or make any so please, if you can, I would greatly appreciate it. Thank you so much!

7 comments:

Amanda said...

You are doing fine with the intense feelings in your writing. I am extremely happy how this story is turing out. Great job.

Sara said...

I'm so excited!! I just got back from a long weekend trip and was expecting to find one, MAYBE two update. But nope - I found FIVE!! Instead of breaking this up and making a trail of comments, I'm going to leave it all here...
"Fairy Tale": OMG - AMAZING! That was an intense chapter with a super intense cliff-hanger. Can't WAIT till the next chapter. I've always felt "More Than Anyone" was my fave...but this one just might take that spot.
"Prettiest Thing": LOVE where this story is going. I will admit I was skeptical at first, but you have sure shown me! This story is great. It's "cute" to a certain extent in the shy character of Ella, but the intensity of feelings you write is amazing. And I love the "side story" between Trevor and Joy. I think its great when you have litte side story going on - just makes things all the better! Every story you ever write I always see a reflection of what is quite obviously some VERY hard work.

If I knew where you lived and it wasn't freaky/incredibly weird, I'd kiss you! :*

Sara

KittyCat86 said...

WOW! You're really working for this story. YAY :D
It's definitely shaping up to be more than alright. It's shaping up to be great.
Great job!!!

Anonymous said...

Wow,
At first I wasn't so sure about this story, but you've convinced me. I love how it's progressing and have really come to like Ella as a character. I hope something comes of Trevor and Joy. Joy seems like a really interesting character.

Anonymous said...

Great chapter, you are doing a good job showing the intensity of the feelings! I really, really like this story, Thanks!!!

Anonymous said...

I am looking forward to Joy and Trevor's story more, actually.. But liking it so far!

Kina

Lauren said...

I'm really liking "The Prettiest Thing" so far. The detail works. Also, who are the actual people you're using for your characters? I'd be down for making some fan art, I just need to know who to look up.