Tuesday, March 31, 2009

More than Anyone - Chapter Three

I am slowly changing some things around and adding new scenes that were not in the original - such as the one of Harry, Anne and Toby at the beginning of chapter three of More than Anyone, now posted on Fictionpress. Please read it and as per usual, let me know what you think of it if you want. Thank you.





Anonymous said...

I loved the added scene. The characters are awesome. I'm really looking foward to more of the story. It's almost scary to see how much your writing has improved! (not that you weren't amazing then) Awesome job!

Naoise said...

Woah...that was fast. I love it though. The Harry/Anne scene was cute! And Toby? Gah, what would you do with him? LOL(:

- Naoise

Jae said...

*SIGH* I love this story. Still at the top of my favorite story/couple list.

Molly said...

I'm really excited about this rewrite!! The added scene with Harry, Anne and then Toby was fantastic; I can't wait to know more about everyone. You've been updating quickly :D

Dolcevita said...

I really enjoyed reading the added scene between Ann and Harry. I really liked that you added a little glimpse of Harry's affection toward his little boys as well. Oh, and ofcourse can't forget about Toby! I never imagined their characters to be the one that you posted, but I can't say I'm complaining! Josh Harnet(sp*) is a fine piece of man. Mmmm haha

Anonymous said...

I loved the added scene with Harry, Anne and Toby. I liked getting to know those characters better and to see Harry's interaction with his son, soooo cute. Great chapter and I cant wait to read the next one!
- R

Rocio said...

This chapter had me cracking up. Ben and Olivia are awesome with the comedic relief- great job with that!

The sexiness that is Ben is right up there with the kindness (and hotness) of Harry. I enjoyed seeing how protective he is of Olivia, esp. regarding her spoiled sister.

Thanks for the update, you're writing just keeps getting better with every story :)