Monday, March 30, 2009

More than Anyone - Chapter Two

Chapter two of More than Anyone is posted on Fictionpress and I just want to say thank you a thousand times for the warm response the first chapter received. I was honestly blown away by the reviews and comments left for me. I hope the second chapter is as well-liked. Also, thank you very much to Caryn for the beautiful picture of Ben Norfolk below. I hate to sound like such a fangirl, and forgive me, but good God, I love Henry Cavill. Okay. That is out of my system now. As always, thank you for reading and reviewing.

9 comments:

Naoise said...

Amen sister. Henry Cavill? -drools-
I'm so excited. Thank you!
Off to read now.

~ Naoise

Anonymous said...

I'm not sure if you even care, but I've always seen Jennifer Morrison as Olivia.
http://www.beyondhollywood.com/gallery/stills2/jennifer-morrison-mar31-1.jpg

Kate said...

Oh, I like the look of that actress. Thank you so much for the suggestion!

Anonymous said...

I love this chapter. And Henry Cavill has to be the hottest man alive, next to Jensen Ackles in my opinion. I love that your using him as Ben, its perfect. I can't wait for this story to continue. I feel like it's going to be another great success!
~Michelle

Anonymous said...

I love this chapter and Henry Cavill as Ben, hotness. Can't wait for the next chapter.
- R

Anonymous said...

P.S. for Sophia, Linda Cardellini
http://cache.daylife.com/imageserve/00nBgFvcca9NH/340x.jpg

roxy324 said...

I can't wait until Olivia stands up to her sister. Let's see that wit and sarcasm happen!

Not that I'm complaining b/c it was a good chapter, but was it shorter than normal? Thanks for the update:)

Kate said...

No, actually, the second chapter was a tad bit longer than the first and the third will be longer than the second. I am just slowly editing and adding more fleshed out scenes as I go.

Anonymous said...

Jennifer morrison is beautiful you re right "Anonymous" but in my mind she looks too young, maybe because now I am used to your actress choice Kate and see in her the spark you describe in Olivia's eyes. Anyways that' just my tiny opinion ^^

Anyways, I still love you for re editing my fav story !! You deserve all those comments !!

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