Saturday, March 28, 2009

More than Anyone - Chapter One

The newly edited chapter one of More than Anyone is now posted on Fictionpress so please check it out for me if you are curious and as always, leave me your thoughts and opinions. I absolutely adore Ben Norfolk and Olivia Grange and I am eager in telling their story again with some new and, hopefully improved, additions.

8 comments:

Cali said...

Alright, I just re-read the first chapter and was going to review on there, but decided I would leave it on here. I love them so much and I am happy you decided to revisit them. You are such a wonderful writer and I can't wait to see what else you come up with because you really are brilliant.

Always, Cali

Dolcevita said...

I have been coming back and forth to your page checking wether you've put up this story and just my luck, you did!!!!! I'm so excited for the changes you've made, but changed or not I still love this story regardless!! A little bit of jealousy in Ben side would be nice? I'd like to see him get all possesive of Olivia. Eh but who am I to say, your'e the writer and I'm just the reader. Haha, can't wait for more!

Anonymous said...

I just love you

bulma-veggie

Anonymous said...

Yay, I was so excited to read this chapter!!! I can't wait to see what you have done to the story, but I know I will love it no matter what! Can't wait for the next update!
- R

Naoise said...

Gosh, I love you and your stories.

I adore Ben and Olivia's conversations/arguments.

Sarah Kim said...

I just wanted to say hi and that I absolutely love your stories!
I stumbled upon "The Prize" [which is my favourite :)] and have been catching up on all your other works. I've also enjoyed reading your revisions and seeing you putting in new aspects into the stories that make me love the characters and the stories themselves even more.
I don't want this to become too gushy so I'll stop now, but I just wanted to let you know that I hope you keep up the great work and I'll be an avid reader.

Thanks,
Sarah Kim

Anonymous said...

I love love love this story so happy you're re-visiting it! Can't wait to read more!

I'd love to read about Brady & Ali as well sometime if you were thinking about doing that!

L x

Anonymous said...

I'm so excited that you posted the newly edited version of this story. I went back the other day and reread the story on AFF and fell in love with it again. Now I can't wait to read the new one on FP! Please post more of this wonderful story soon.
~Michelle

(ps. I LOVE THE CHARACTER PICTURES!!)