Monday, April 6, 2009
More than Anyone - Chapter Six
I hope everyone had a good weekend. My sister was in town and we always have a blast together. I was able to work on chapter six of More than Anyone, which is now posted on Fictionpress. I added a scene with Ben and Rose Kirkland, the widow of Evan from Better Together. I wanted to add her character to the rewrite because she and Ben had a special little relationship in that story that I wanted to carry on into this one. Please read and review it for me and thank you ahead of time for doing so.
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3 comments:
I just read the past two chapters together. I am so totally loving these new scenes and the new interactions between the different characters! Thanks for the updates! Ben (Henry Cavil) is oh so yummy :)
- R
I'm so happy that you are updating like crazy. It's amazing and makes my days so much better. I loved the ending scene with Rose and Ben. Rose is such a sweet woman, and I loved how you added the "mmmhmmm" lines in there. It was adorable and very necessary for Ben. And I can picture Henry Cavill(drool!) as Ben perefectly! It makes it so much more exciting to read! Oh how I love Henry...
~Michelle
Oh yes Henry Cavill is most definitely perfect for Ben. Now if I watch anything with him in it I'll think of Ben Norfolk! Rose is so sweet. I loved Her and Ben's little talk about Olivia.
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