Wednesday, April 22, 2009

More than Anyone - Chapter Eleven

For some reason, I woke up at 3:30 this morning and was unable to get back to sleep. So instead of staring hopelessly at the clock, I decided to write and chapter eleven of More than Anyone is now posted on Fictionpress. I added a tiny little scene with Harry and Anne and also, I have Ben meeting Maria Grange at the end - just very small additions but I love Harry and Anne so I love writing them and I also wanted Ben to meet Olivia’s mother for a later scene I have planned. Thank you in advance for reading and reviewing. I am so happy with just how loved this story is.

Harry

Anne

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love when you put new stuff in it, it made me rediscover this story, seeing how much I have read the original one ^^
Love the "asparagus line" and the fact that we'll maybe see a new interaction between Olivia's mother and the "couple" in addition to her parents' anniversary party (if you keep that)

Perfect kiss scen by the way ^^
bulma-veegie

Anonymous said...

and already more comments than on you AFF profil for the same story

Congrats

bulma-veggie

littlewiseone said...

Love this chapter. The added scence really worked. You amaze me with your crreativity. Awesome.

roxy324 said...

The character photos for Anne and Harry are perfect. I sometimes have a hard time picturing characters but those two are so spot on it's almost like a film playing when I read.

littlewiseone said...

Just so you know, I'm about to re- read The Prize. I've lost count of how many times I've read it but I personally think you should share ith with the people on Fictionpress, you don't have to change a word.

Just a thought!

Anonymous said...

Hey Kate,

Happy Friday! I will try to read all of the updates tonight or tomorrow. Guess what? Today I just discovered a band called "Nouvelle Vague" and they are from France, of course. I especially like their remake of "Dancing With Myself". You have probably heard of them before but if you haven't take a listen to them. It could be a song about how Olivia feels about Toby song, maybe:)

7years