Wednesday, April 22, 2009

More than Anyone - Chapter Eleven

For some reason, I woke up at 3:30 this morning and was unable to get back to sleep. So instead of staring hopelessly at the clock, I decided to write and chapter eleven of More than Anyone is now posted on Fictionpress. I added a tiny little scene with Harry and Anne and also, I have Ben meeting Maria Grange at the end - just very small additions but I love Harry and Anne so I love writing them and I also wanted Ben to meet Olivia’s mother for a later scene I have planned. Thank you in advance for reading and reviewing. I am so happy with just how loved this story is.




Anonymous said...

I love when you put new stuff in it, it made me rediscover this story, seeing how much I have read the original one ^^
Love the "asparagus line" and the fact that we'll maybe see a new interaction between Olivia's mother and the "couple" in addition to her parents' anniversary party (if you keep that)

Perfect kiss scen by the way ^^

Anonymous said...

and already more comments than on you AFF profil for the same story



littlewiseone said...

Love this chapter. The added scence really worked. You amaze me with your crreativity. Awesome.

roxy324 said...

The character photos for Anne and Harry are perfect. I sometimes have a hard time picturing characters but those two are so spot on it's almost like a film playing when I read.

littlewiseone said...

Just so you know, I'm about to re- read The Prize. I've lost count of how many times I've read it but I personally think you should share ith with the people on Fictionpress, you don't have to change a word.

Just a thought!

Anonymous said...

Hey Kate,

Happy Friday! I will try to read all of the updates tonight or tomorrow. Guess what? Today I just discovered a band called "Nouvelle Vague" and they are from France, of course. I especially like their remake of "Dancing With Myself". You have probably heard of them before but if you haven't take a listen to them. It could be a song about how Olivia feels about Toby song, maybe:)