Friday, April 3, 2009
More than Anyone - Chapter Five
Chapter five of More than Anyone is now posted on Fictionpress so please read and review it for me. It is a heavy Olivia chapter and there is also a new added scene with Olivia and Anne featured at the end of the chapter. I always wanted to show more of Anne in the story as well as how she deals with Harry and his close friendships with Toby and Olivia. Please read and let me know what you think. Thank you very much in advance.
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I love to read more about Olivia and Anne, Anne is a sweetheart. And it pleases me to read all the interactions you make with original stuffs, all the messages Toby left on her voicemail, why Harry is tired at work ...
I used to find that Ben and Liv were going too quickly from Hatred to Love, coz I loved their angry verbal exchanges but it's so perfect to see them getting closer!!
Thank you so much !!!
bulma-veggie
Continues to be fantastic! Thank you :)
I have a question, here I am in France and today I was looking for lovestories novels, about girls my age, in their twenties, and I couldn't find one (apart from yours Kate of course); it was always about teenagers or women in their forties. So If you know any novels you ike, which are lovestory (even with fantastic in it, or sci fi or just romance, old or new ones...) please tell me so coz it's getting desesperate. The last one I found was (the host' of Meyer
bulma-veggie
Loving the new version. It does flesh out of the story... ie. why a womanizer like Toby is suddenly getting married, and why Olivia accepted Ben's help.
Hey Kate,
I hope your Saturday is going great! In my chapter 3 review I mentioned Toby instead of Harry and Anne, sorry. I hope you can update tonight. Thank you.
7years
Hi I'm a first time reader. I just read The Prize, Collide, and Beyond the Grey Sky within this week. I'm now beginning More than Anyone, and I'm so impressed by your writing skills.
I'm really happy i found out about this website. Thanks for persisting and writing!
Your fan, Esther.
Hey Kate,
I have songs! For Ben and Olivia of course. I love this song by Carbon Leaf "Life Less Ordinary" and as I mentioned before Billy Talent, "Surrender". Oh by the way, good morning! I hope you have a restful Sunday.
7years
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kSwACrQR9vc
I linked this song to Olivia when I heard it, as well as 'this time' by Jonathan Rhys Meyer
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yUy64Jx_9dY
(I used to like to listen to raining in Baltimore when I read your story, but the lyrics don't match with the story if I remember well:( )
bulma-veggie
I just wanted to say that I wish you'd put the list of your stories back up on the side.
also, Violet. I was watching Tristan and Isolde to get a fix of Henry Cavill, and I was saw Sohpia Myles and said that's perfect for her (to me).
http://whatsontv.co.uk/blogs/tvspy/wp-content/blogs.dir/2/files/final-sexy-chicks/sophia-myles-1.jpg
I really enjoyed this story the 1st time round, and I'm equally happy this time. Please update soon.
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