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Update notices, pictures and random tidbits about the collection of stories by templeton21 aka Kate. —♥—
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“I can resist everything except temptation.” – from Lady Windermere's Fan by Oscar Wilde
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- A Pocketful of Poppies - Part Ten
- Crazy and Beautiful
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- Soldier Boy - Chapter Two
- A Pocketful of Poppies - Part Eight
- Soldier Boy - Chapter One
- A Pocketful of Poppies - Part Seven
- Strange and Beautiful
- A Pocketful of Poppies - Part Six
- The Flower Girl - Chapter Eighteen
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- Flattered Beyond Words
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4 comments:
I liked this chapter a lot. I feel so badly for Poppy. You are really good at describing her pain. I can almost feel it. When I read, I tend to try to connect with the characters a lot. It's weird. Anywho, I loved it. I'm excited to see where this leads to. And as for that BS anonymous email, forget that dickhead. He or she has no life. Please ignore it and keep doing what you're doing. I know that a lot of people nominated you for that fiction press award, so there are people who love your work! I can't wait for more!
~Michelle
It's great that you decided to revisit this story. This version give more depth and intensity as well as insight, esp. this chapter. Poppy's deep melancholy comes through strongly and its very poignant.
I hope to see her journey from what she's feeling now to finally starting to heal.
Also, GREAT to see Holden again! I love his character.
I really love this story! this Poppy is so much more depressed & introverted to the other Poppy you wrote, makes me sad :( I can't wait to see what happens with this whole tutoring thing & how things develop with Justin! Update soon.
Oh & as well I saw that you've been getting some negative emails again I really hope your not paying any attention, it's so pathetic!
L x
All I have to say is that Poppy is making me sad right now. I mean it's just too much for a person to carry everybody's problems. Hey, I've been there and done it and it's not fun at all.
Love the chapter and I can't help but laugh how overprotective Holden was because he reminds me of how overprotective my friends, parents, siblings, and my sibling and parents' friends over me.
Great Job!
~Dove~
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