Tuesday, January 6, 2009

A Pocketful of Poppies - Part Five

And I’m back! Part five of A Pocketful of Poppies is now posted on Fictionpress so please read it and review it for me. I love to hear what everyone thinks about thank you for taking the time to let me know.

Holden

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

I liked this chapter a lot. I feel so badly for Poppy. You are really good at describing her pain. I can almost feel it. When I read, I tend to try to connect with the characters a lot. It's weird. Anywho, I loved it. I'm excited to see where this leads to. And as for that BS anonymous email, forget that dickhead. He or she has no life. Please ignore it and keep doing what you're doing. I know that a lot of people nominated you for that fiction press award, so there are people who love your work! I can't wait for more!
~Michelle

Rocio said...

It's great that you decided to revisit this story. This version give more depth and intensity as well as insight, esp. this chapter. Poppy's deep melancholy comes through strongly and its very poignant.

I hope to see her journey from what she's feeling now to finally starting to heal.

Also, GREAT to see Holden again! I love his character.

Anonymous said...

I really love this story! this Poppy is so much more depressed & introverted to the other Poppy you wrote, makes me sad :( I can't wait to see what happens with this whole tutoring thing & how things develop with Justin! Update soon.

Oh & as well I saw that you've been getting some negative emails again I really hope your not paying any attention, it's so pathetic!

L x

Anonymous said...

All I have to say is that Poppy is making me sad right now. I mean it's just too much for a person to carry everybody's problems. Hey, I've been there and done it and it's not fun at all.

Love the chapter and I can't help but laugh how overprotective Holden was because he reminds me of how overprotective my friends, parents, siblings, and my sibling and parents' friends over me.

Great Job!

~Dove~

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