Wednesday, January 7, 2009

The Flower Girl - Chapter Sixteen

Part sixteen of The Flower Girl is now posted on Fictionpress.com so as usual, the drill remains the same. Please read and review it for me. I would greatly appreciate it. There are just two more chapters remaining in this story before it is complete and I would love to get feedback. Thank you very much in advance. Also, below is a picture of Jason Jenkins.

Jason

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

AH! MORE MORE MORE! HAWKIN CAN NOT BE EVIL! NO! I'm going to go crazy Kate, honestly.
~Michelle

Jen said...

Random post...nothing to do with "The Flower Girl", but I was catching up with TPT and I started listening to Joshua Radin's "I'd Rather Be with You". The song is quite fitting for Brett and Ella. Just thought I'd pass that along.

Anonymous said...

OMG!? Don't leave it there!! :O:O This story actually scares me! I hope Alice & the baby are ok & nobody good dies :( Update soon!

L x

Anonymous said...

CLIFFHANGER!?! NOOOO!

Hawkin IS good. He CAN'T be evil.

~Naoise

Amanda said...

Oh man what is happening? Great chapter Kate. I cannot wait to read the rest of the chapter. Why do I have a feeling that Hawkin is good but evil had him in the darkness for soo long that Molly's love saved him? Can't wait.

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