Friday, December 5, 2008

The Flower Girl - Part Twelve

Please go to Fictionpress and read part twelve of The Flower Girl. As always, let me know what you think. I have been sick for the past couple of days so I hope it is up to par with the previous installments. Also, to 7 Years, thank you for the song suggestion for Turkish and Meg. I have been listening to it on repeat since you talked about it and next time I post the next chapter of Dark Side of the Moon, I am also going to post the song since I think it is perfect for that couple. Thank you to everyone in advance for reading and reviewing The Flower Girl for me.


Anonymous said...

Love it, and especially the confrontation father-daughter, really sad and sweet at the same time. I want to see how they are all gonna react to Molly's act, and how Hawkin and Molly are gonna repare their relationship.

Wish you a good recovery since you were sick! I don't have my picture logiciel anymore so I'm angry I can't no longer make you artworks ...

Don't know if you have read this com of mine, here I post it in case you haven't :
I just rediscover this song by one of my favorite group, After forever, the song is named "Intrinsic", and I think it sounds great for "The flower Girl", here are some of the lyrics (of course if you don't like metal music, lol, it's not gonna be the one for you)

At night, assimilate life
In the infinite realm
of our intrinsic side

Find, the missing parts of the mind
The hidden truth behind
Our dungeon of thoughts, this labyrinth

Search, it has a reason and a meaning
Remembered and repeated
A guide, not to be ignored

Feel, there's so much to feel
Amnesia must confiscate an elusive link
to consciousness

It's there, cause there's so much we don't know
Even our own true face
It's there, facing what we can't have


Anonymous said...

I LOVE this story SO much. It's so intense and crazy. I'm so sad about Molly and Hawkin though. That's going to be hard to fix. Please write more soon! I'm dying to know what happens to Alice!

Anonymous said...

This chapter was filled with so many things. It left me wanted more, alot. I need to find out what will happen to Alice!

Anonymous said...

Hey Kate,

You are so welcome. I hope you feel better. I hope to read/review chapter 12 tonight. Thank you.


Anonymous said...

Hope you're feeling better. That was another great chapter! I hope that isn't the end of Molly & Hawkin now I don't want some new randomer to come in!? Can't wait to find out what's happening with Alice too!

Update when you can!!

L x

Anonymous said...

Ack! I am so far behind, Kate. And I apologize for being so. Things have just been a little crazy. I do check your blog often, so I know how far behind I am. Hopefully I'll be able to get to it this week and leave you some wonderful comments. Sorry to hear that you are not feeling so great... hope that you get better soon!