Monday, November 19, 2007

Bus Stop

Since I don't have that much time for writing at the moment, I didn't want everyone to go too long without a Templeton fix so I have posted a one-shot on both Fictionpress.com and AFF.net that I wrote a few months ago but never posted for some reason. Bus Stop is the story of Jim and Layla told from Jim's point of view. Please read it and review for me. Also, I was so pissed off. I had been working on the next chapter of The Prize but something happened to my computer and the chapter disappeared. It was discouraging to say the least but I promise to work on it the next time I have a spare minute... or hour. Thank you! And don't forget to read Bus Stop for me.

Jim

Layla

6 comments:

Sara said...

Amazing! That was such a cute story. Of course, as always, when you finish everything else you have on your plate, I would so love to see a continuation of this story. Especially since it has the song in it, and the song continues and whatnot. :)

Anyways...it's great as is and it was nice to have a little taste of your work even when you are resting.

Sara

Anonymous said...

cute, perfect fluff! loved it

Anonymous said...

that was a perfect very cute story ^^
bulma-veggie (french fan)

PS: did you receive my pictures for "The prize"?

Amanda said...

It was a very good story. You have alot on your plate so don't rush anything on the count of us. I'm glad that you are doing well and don't worry everything will fall into place.

Anonymous said...

I enjoyed it, such a cute story! Thank you for taking the time to post it!!

Anonymous said...

I really enjoyed this story. It was cute and so enjoyable. Thanks for thinking of us while your life has so much going on. Congratulations on your new little one and don't worry about getting right back to writing. We all understand that your family is number one.
-Steph