Thursday, November 1, 2007

Blackout

I wrote a short one-shot story and posted it on Fictionpress.com earlier and am now posting it on AFF.net. It was written completely randomly and I'm not sure exactly where it came from but I wrote it nonetheless. It's fluff and somewhat predictable near the end but I hope everyone enjoys it. Below, there are pictures of the two characters: Mark Hawke and Jenna Morton. Please read and review Blackout for me. Thank you.

Jenna

Mark

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

I liked it. There are so many places this story could go if you chose to continue. If not, it still works as a one-shot. My imagination will just have to do the rest, which shouldn't be too hard considering it has already created a continuing storyline for these characters.

It seems kinda like a story you pitched here on your blog a while ago.

J

Anonymous said...

I really enjoyed the story. Even if it was a bit predictable at the end, it was still a very good story. In such a short time you were able to make me feel for the characters. If you decided to continue with this story, I'd defintiely read it, but if not, it's something you should be proud of.
-Steph

strawberris said...

that was nice. its nice to read pure fluff. thanx u made my day better

Anonymous said...

Great story ^^ Love it, simple, short but interesting and well-writen ! =D
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