Saturday, August 15, 2009

Crash - Chapter One

So, this is what my muse wrote when I sat down at the computer. Chapter one of Crash is now loaded onto Fictionpress.com so check it out if you are interested. We will see how this goes.

Dan Boyd

Max Henley

26 comments:

Anonymous said...

So far it looks really interesting!
Can't wait till you update again.
xoxo
karoru

Anonymous said...

you're back...yeah! looks good. i can't wait for more.

Anonymous said...

This is amazing! one question: will you finish More than anyone? b/c im gonna kill my self( figuratively)and the sweetest thing sequel? plz finish one of them lol! i love your stories! keep writing

momo

Caryn said...

Im so interested! I like how in depth you went with Max's character. Cant wait for more.

Nyah_87 said...

I can't believe you're back after so long! Hoping for an update soon.

XOXO

Anonymous said...

are you going to continue this? i liked it!
~Michelle (coolbeanie)

Jen said...

It's good to see that you're back. And if you haven't already, you might want to check out the plagiarism haven community on livejournal.

Again, it's good to see something new from you. I hope the publishing venture is going well.

Naoise said...

Love, love, love this!
Yay Katie!

Lora said...

Love this first chapter and I really can't wait for you to continue... so I hope you will, it's been almost 4 monts ;)
Yay, Shia is awesome. I'm glad you picked him :)
Have a great day!

Anonymous said...

No offense, but I really don't think it's right to leave all of your readers hanging. I'm not even sure if you're reading this and I totally understand being plagerized as an author. Since I write on fic. press myself, but at least finish the stories. Have you even seen the comments readers send to you? I'm not saying it's selfish, but for example, u started 1 chapter of this and never continued it, then in More Than Anyone you left everyone hanging on chapter 14. I think it's kind of selfish.

Anonymous said...

Hi i was just wondering if your gonna actually finish your stories? i mean at least let your readers know if youve given up on them. i know you were copied and that musy have been horrible. but just because one or two people did that you have now let down alot of your fans which i would deem very selfish.

Rachel

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