tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post7558000325127064672..comments2023-10-22T02:56:29.004-05:00Comments on Fiction by Kate: The Prettiest Thing - Chapter TwelveKatehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02321101592942670297noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-58907750233990833962008-02-25T09:25:00.000-06:002008-02-25T09:25:00.000-06:00Hi! I'm off now to read the new chapter! I'm sure ...Hi! I'm off now to read the new chapter! I'm sure it's as great as usual.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-20596714035619963612008-02-23T23:31:00.000-06:002008-02-23T23:31:00.000-06:00I agree with everyone else that it was good to get...I agree with everyone else that it was good to get inside Brett's head. <BR/><BR/>JAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-62958388115152727242008-02-23T14:08:00.000-06:002008-02-23T14:08:00.000-06:00great chapter with an interesting insight into Bre...great chapter with an interesting insight into Brett's mind ^^<BR/>Can't wait for the next chapter =D<BR/><B>bulma-veggie</B>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-1624848756424928082008-02-23T13:45:00.000-06:002008-02-23T13:45:00.000-06:00I love the chapter. I love how you wrote what was ...I love the chapter. I love how you wrote what was going on in Brett's mind. Keep up the great work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-66731967975529959582008-02-23T10:16:00.000-06:002008-02-23T10:16:00.000-06:00Loved this chapter. Liked getting into to Brett's...Loved this chapter. Liked getting into to Brett's confused little head. Keep up the good work.<BR/><BR/>ShannaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-81609057318035558192008-02-23T10:15:00.000-06:002008-02-23T10:15:00.000-06:00Another great chapter. I really think Brett needs...Another great chapter. I really think Brett needs to confide in his best friend and let fate move. Right now he is so blocked.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-81993635252748950182008-02-23T07:04:00.000-06:002008-02-23T07:04:00.000-06:00Really liked this chapter. It was nice to see more...Really liked this chapter.<BR/><BR/> It was nice to see more of an insight into Brett's charecter but bless I feel bad for all the struggle's he's going through with Ella & his dad. I think though things will be looking up soon! <BR/><BR/>Hope Trevor's big meeting goes well & we get some more interaction with him & Joy soon. Great job as always can't wait for more! <BR/><BR/>L xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-11090905443239885742008-02-22T22:19:00.000-06:002008-02-22T22:19:00.000-06:00Hey there! Thanks for the update. It was great to...Hey there! Thanks for the update. <BR/><BR/> It was great to be in Brett's head for a chapter and to see what he was thinking. I hope he and his dad work things out, they need each other.<BR/><BR/> I think Brett has a lot more to look forward to in his life then he can imagine right now. <BR/><BR/>It would be great if after the story is done you could write a single chapter of where everybody is and what they are doing 10 years down the road. With these longer stories I get really interested in the characters and always try and envision them into the future and what their lives might be like.<BR/><BR/>Thanks! ~HMCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-30567270510260320332008-02-22T20:05:00.000-06:002008-02-22T20:05:00.000-06:00Great chapter! I really liked the "trip" into Bret...Great chapter! I really liked the "trip" into Brett's mind. You are such an amazing author :)<BR/>And to clarify an earlier comment, I don't want Ella to be mean and make Brett jealous - I know that's not her character. All I meant was do exactly what you are - let him see what he'd be missing if he screws this up. <BR/>But anyways, GREAT job!! Can't wait for 13!<BR/>SaraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com