tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post5393695331581763072..comments2023-10-22T02:56:29.004-05:00Comments on Fiction by Kate: Ghetto GospelKatehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02321101592942670297noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-79042999924205513892008-02-11T15:37:00.000-06:002008-02-11T15:37:00.000-06:00Hi Kate,I really enjoyed the first chapter. I coul...Hi Kate,<BR/><BR/>I really enjoyed the first chapter. I could just feel the chemistry between Jane and Preston. I'll definitely be on the lookout for future chapters. After reading your summary, I was immediately intrigued. I'm a sociology major, so this story looks incredible interesting. Love the characters. Preston is hot and Jane is so pretty! <BR/><BR/>-StephAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-3130082541602654112008-02-11T04:01:00.000-06:002008-02-11T04:01:00.000-06:00I think once you get into the second and third cha...I think once you get into the second and third chapters, the flow will become better. I see that you have chosen a slightly different style in conveying the story so maybe that is what will take time for you to adjust to...<BR/><BR/>It is nice and I look forward to reading the rest of it. I hope that you will take time in unfolding the chapters as I feel this is not a story to be rushed..<BR/><BR/>I will be waiting in anticipation to read every new chapter that you come up with for this story. I think you will delight us all with this one. Well, for us who like mixed couples at least.<BR/><BR/>KinaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-46245893624176683592008-02-11T03:05:00.000-06:002008-02-11T03:05:00.000-06:00Great 1st chapter so far, nothing confusing about ...Great 1st chapter so far, nothing confusing about you writing this! It looks like the beginning of a love story, but with a very interesting social background ! ! I will love to read more about Jane & Preston !!<BR/><B>bulma-veggie</B>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-26699752296919866182008-02-10T14:18:00.000-06:002008-02-10T14:18:00.000-06:00After reading the summary of this story, I was imm...After reading the summary of this story, I was immediately interested in reading it!<BR/><BR/>I wasn't expecting Jane and Preston to meet in the first chapter and that made me really happy. I'm really excited for this story, but I was wondering why you posted it on FictionPress and not on AFF.net?<BR/><BR/>I was just curious. I've been really busy these days and I haven't been able to leave a proper review for some time. I shouldn't be reading or reviewing now since I have a midterm essay that's due tomorrow but I procrastinate and I can't help reading your stories! <BR/><BR/>:-)<BR/><BR/>I hope we get to see more chapters for "Ghetto Gospel" soon!Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11867692685934156636noreply@blogger.com