tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post2225104318133791088..comments2023-10-22T02:56:29.004-05:00Comments on Fiction by Kate: A Slow Burn - Chapter OneKatehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02321101592942670297noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-59705672720935393832008-06-02T18:57:00.000-05:002008-06-02T18:57:00.000-05:00Wow. I go away for the weekend and look at all the...Wow. I go away for the weekend and look at all the hard work you've done. I really like the first chapter. It was hot and sexy, but there was a sweet side to it too. I especially love their banter. Now I'm going to read the second chapter.<BR/>-StephAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-15215475360318964732008-06-01T14:46:00.000-05:002008-06-01T14:46:00.000-05:00This is really good. Keep up the good work Ma'am!...This is really good. Keep up the good work Ma'am!Nhi P. Tranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08743453380520902127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-66511176785322535922008-06-01T11:51:00.000-05:002008-06-01T11:51:00.000-05:00Holy Smokes that was hot! Excellent start I can s...Holy Smokes that was hot! Excellent start I can see so many places this could go and I can't wait to see what direction you take. Now I have to go take a cool shower to cool off. I'm sweating after reading that scene. Excellent writing.littlewiseonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03126710956125406368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-82853522095115859262008-05-31T20:40:00.000-05:002008-05-31T20:40:00.000-05:00Greeeeeat start!You already have me hooked!!Cant w...Greeeeeat start!<BR/>You already have me hooked!!<BR/>Cant wait til u update again!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-28137427088846106822008-05-31T19:11:00.000-05:002008-05-31T19:11:00.000-05:00Excellent start, loved the first chpater - hopeful...Excellent start, loved the first chpater - hopefully it keeps going strong!<BR/><BR/>CAN"T WAIT FOR MOREAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-75482760157259493322008-05-31T18:00:00.000-05:002008-05-31T18:00:00.000-05:00You were right; this is different from your usual ...You were right; this is different from your usual stories. <BR/><BR/>This was a good start, and I'm interested to see where you take these characters.<BR/><BR/>JAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-52996999936574783932008-05-31T12:39:00.000-05:002008-05-31T12:39:00.000-05:00Whaou ! This hot in chapter 1 , I can't wait to se...Whaou ! This hot in chapter 1 , I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next XD<BR/>Seriously even though it's sexy you already see a beautiful sweet side in their meeting ^^<BR/><B>bulma-veggie</B>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-88353943018688185692008-05-31T12:35:00.000-05:002008-05-31T12:35:00.000-05:00Wow! I was totally expecting a wait after the Pret...Wow! I was totally expecting a wait after the Prettiest Thing. This was such a nice surprise! Beautifully written... HOT... I can't wait for the story to continue! Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com