tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post1475191133111510679..comments2023-10-22T02:56:29.004-05:00Comments on Fiction by Kate: TPT Rewrite - Chapters 5 & 6Katehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02321101592942670297noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-55261590459333482592008-09-07T21:38:00.000-05:002008-09-07T21:38:00.000-05:00As I re-read TPT I'm trying to see how this versio...As I re-read TPT I'm trying to see how this version is different from the original. I don't see huge changes and I'm happy because I loved the original. In chapter 5 I thought Brett explained how he was feeling (after the 1st kiss) a little better this time around, but I have to say, he was still a jerk. But a lovable jerk all the same. Please keep up the excellent work.. I like the way Trevor and Joy are progressing as well. I think the 1st time around I was so focused on Brett and Ella I was not prepared to accept the Trevor and Joy relationship nearly as much, I'm very open to is, and can't wait to see what changes you make to their relationship as you re-write..littlewiseonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03126710956125406368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5081381042290566638.post-68675161132990184602008-09-06T13:57:00.000-05:002008-09-06T13:57:00.000-05:00Oh I love chapter 5!! That was my favorite chapter...Oh I love chapter 5!! That was my favorite chapter the first time you posted it, and it still is! Such a cute moment in the start of Brett & Ella's relationship!!! :) I'm so happy you are reposting this story - it's by far my favorite!! And all the subtle little changes and adds/edits are so fun to look for!! :) <BR/><BR/>Keep up the amazing work my friend!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com